A Love Poem - Part 1

[JackBarrattPoet]

Is it possible to write an original love poem? I have tried.



Hands
So subtle, sweet
Eyes an entrance
A labyrinth
Your hands
Your legs, your feet
So slight, but far away
As a tree is, she
As one; let nothing before be
As we choke on love
She breathes
Free

[JackBarrattPoet]

Here is a reading: A Love Poem - Part 1 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3v8QbhJi6ic)

[Buh4Bee]

The poem has more meaning to me when you read it verses,just letting the reader read and interpret independently. I think you read it with a good deal of control.