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gingerandy1
01-08-2013, 05:05 PM
Love not given lightly


Love dissected holds no magic
Cold and lonely it dies, sick and infected
Closely watched or clinically inspected
It shows all, our weakness
Fears and failures
Love interrupted is young and disaffected
Lost in a world that's harsh and aggressive
But love that's nurtured and left to grow
Gains both strength and acceptance
Then given time and space to flow
It quickly gains momentum

Delta40
01-08-2013, 05:43 PM
Och! Ah dinna know if this is too sickly sweet for me but I quite like it.

Charles Darnay
01-08-2013, 06:33 PM
I like the first part (lines 1-7). The last bit has a fine rhythm, but it really is a bit much for how plainly it is stated.