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organizedchaos
01-07-2013, 06:08 PM
the familiar scent of falling
seeps through my nostrils
and cascades all the way to my brain stem
flirting with those basic survival instincts
yet again
the obsession wraps around me
and I feel the smoke engulf my lungs
just when I thought it was all over
you sang that song
and I landed flat on my back

WolfLarsen
01-07-2013, 09:52 PM
This is beautiful!

I mean it's disturbing but it's beautiful writing! Disturbing can be beautiful!