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Lykren
01-02-2013, 05:08 PM
The wind comes down from the mountain
and rushes through all the streets.
The leafless trees are shaken,
the tow'ring cloud retreats.
The sky is clean and woken;
Spring has up and spoken.

Premature, I know, but it's what came to mind.

I don't usually do rhythm and rhyme - how did I do?

hillwalker
01-02-2013, 09:49 PM
How did you do? A weather update that rhymes. . . don't see the point to be honest.

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5814
01-20-2013, 06:10 AM
Wind comes to me and brings to light

cacian
01-20-2013, 07:16 AM
I like it.:)
It is short but captive to the imagination.