Crash

[Delta40]

We pedalled after
love
chasing dappled
rays of hope

through the trees
along the path
round the pond

down the hill we sped

[Delta40]

I was going to use this as part of something I'm writing.

[Pete Ak]

Yes it feels like a fragment, an interesting and entertaining fragment tho. I'm sure you should be using 'pedalled' rather than peddled btw.

[Delta40]

Ooh! thanks Pete. Good point.