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WolfLarsen
12-31-2012, 12:34 PM
Resolution # 6,907,261
Bop! Clap clap clap clap!

It's time to reorganize margarine!
It's time to clean our shoes with the blue skies!
It's time for nuditY-nUdity-nudity!
WOW for all the bisexual hamburgers at your favorite upside-down & around restaurant!
Now escape to a prison!
Be happy with the frogs in the forest!
Run naked through your favorite City Hall as you recite pigs to all the elephants & donkeys!
Charge at invisible walls until you become someone else!
Hijack your own body!

miyako73
12-31-2012, 12:39 PM
I don't know if they will see your subtle creativity, but I do like in these lines:

It's time to reorganize margarine!

Now escape to a prison!

Is this for me? hehehehe Just asking.

Volya
12-31-2012, 01:02 PM
I think your poems and stories would be better Wolfie, if you had less sex and faeces, and instead had madness of a more creative kind. The whole poop-poop-sex act gets tiresome after a while, it would be refreshing if you came up with something new. I do find your work quite fun to read though, it just needs more variety.

Charles Darnay
12-31-2012, 01:16 PM
I must say, I really like:

"WOW for all the bisexual hamburgers at your favorite upside-down & around restaurant!"

I actually like this because it is a rare case when you actually follow your own advice and so something different - as opposed to most of your stuff which is more of the same.

Calidore
12-31-2012, 01:50 PM
More exclamation points than Stan Lee!

I do like this line:

"Charge at invisible walls until you become someone else!"

The ongoing problem is, in your obsession with top-of-the-head randomness over substance, I never know if something like this is a result of intent or the million-monkeys effect.

WolfLarsen
12-31-2012, 04:37 PM
The ongoing problem is, in your obsession with top-of-the-head randomness over substance, I never know if something like this is a result of intent or the million-monkeys effect.

Andrew Breton automatic writing technique. Although I probably didn't know anything about Andrew Breton or automatic writing when I started composing in this manner.

Chicago man: You from the north side or the south side? Cubs or White Sox?

Calidore
12-31-2012, 05:58 PM
Chicago man: You from the north side or the south side? Cubs or White Sox?

Lifelong North Sider. Neither team; baseball bores me comatose. I even tried watching the Sox when they went to the World Series a few years back, and still couldn't do it.

WolfLarsen
12-31-2012, 07:03 PM
Lifelong North Sider. Neither team; baseball bores me comatose. I even tried watching the Sox when they went to the World Series a few years back, and still couldn't do it.

I will agree that baseball is boring as hell.

The cool thing about the North Side is that's where most of the avant-garde plays and stuff are.

But the south side is real.

I left Chicago when I was 18. That was two and half decades ago. I haven't really lived anywhere since.

islandclimber
01-03-2013, 06:33 PM
Wolf. You might take a look at the works of Ishmael Reed in this new year, if you have not done so already. I think it would resonate with you. Especially "The Freelance Pallbearers" and maybe "Mumbo Jumbo" as well. Quite an interesting and unique writer. Definitely not at all conventional.

islandclimber
01-03-2013, 06:34 PM
Ps. When you say Andrew Breton I assume you are referring to André Breton, of surrealist fame? Also, the last two lines of your resolution are great. "Hijack your own body!" What a beautiful concept.

cacian
01-04-2013, 05:14 AM
How about
it is time to rearranges ones ideas and becomes less obvious with one's own body for it is all in the mind?