As Yet Untitled

[E.A Rumfield]

Amongst the skeletons of a once great kingdom,
Strung out on electric guitar and plum wine,
A shadow of my former self,
Dancing on the graves of everything
that has come here to now.
Amidst the ruins of a long gone scene,
tortured and raped, its inhabitants
now refugees.
Here stands our arrogance,
built upon layers of life
thicker than the riches of soil.
Here stands man,
**** in one hand pissing in the river
straw in the other
greedily sipping.

[Lykren]

No intention apprehended from the reading of this poem.

[WolfLarsen]

Not bad. Some good lines here like:

"Amongst the skeletons of a once great kingdom,
Strung out on electric guitar and plum wine,

Dancing on the graves of everything

Amidst the ruins of a long gone scene,
tortured and raped, its inhabitants
now refugees.
Here stands our arrogance,
built upon layers of life
thicker than the riches of soil."

Unfortunately the meaning of the next part is lost to me since the website automatically censores some things:

**** in one hand pissing in the river
straw in the other
greedily sipping.

[E.A Rumfield]

The word I used was **** which is just another word for the rooster. I don't understand, would they censor pussy which is just another name for that pretty female organ?