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cacian
12-28-2012, 08:24 AM
poetry bless
it makes me
smile
whenever I file
a world of choirs
made up of
sounds sceneries
and ires
poetry
styles
ideas otherwise
mild
such is the true
element of wryte

AuntShecky
12-28-2012, 03:59 PM
"a world of choirs" is very nice.

"file"?

"ires"?

"wryte"? a portmanteau word for "wry" (dry humor) + "write"?

cacian
12-29-2012, 05:07 AM
Hi AuntShecky and thank you for reading and feedback.
'File' as in to compile and 'Ires' as in burst of energies/feelings.
Wryte is another word for write spelled with a Y. I wanted to sound like RIOT.
Your version of it interesting thank you for it.