Remember Me Softly

[E.A Rumfield]

We all must die someday.
So grieve not when it is my time
just remember me softly,
with a word or two if necessary,
but preferably in silence,
remember me as everything that is.

[Pete Ak]

Touching and quite dramatic. I wonder if you considered moving the full stop (period for Americans!) from after 'time' to after 'someday'? The snappy first sentence would add to the drama I feel.