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Jassy Melson
12-12-2012, 05:38 PM
Horserump: Hey, have you heard the latest?
Goatbreath: No, what's up.
Horserump: Jassy Melson has had a book published.
Cowdung: You've got to be kidding me.
Horsebreath: No, I heard it from Horsemouth. And get this: The title of the book is The Happy Demise of Hidy the Clown and Other Stories.
Goatbreath: I don't believe it. You know what I think? I think Jassy Melson has started a rumor to get back at all of us.
Cowdung: How do we know it's not just a rumor?
Horserump: I looked it up. There is a book that's been newly published by Tanasi Press entitled The Happy Demise of Hidy the Clown and Other Stories. I even checked the ISBN number on it. There's no doubt about it. It's been published.
Cowdung: Hard to believe.
Goatbreath: Yeah, especially after that story.
Horserump: Which story?
Goatbreath: The Happy Demise of Hidy the Clown.
Cowdung: I must admit, I haven't read it, but reading all the posts from all of you, I just assumed it was a bad story.
Goatbreath: Oh, it's a bad story, all right. It's one of the worst stories that's ever been posted on here.
Horserump: Have you read it?
Goatbreath: Well, no, but reading Horsemouth's denunciation of it it made me think it must be pretty rotten.
Cowdung: I agree. If Horsemouth said it was bad, then it has to be bad.
Horserump: I don't know. Apparently by its being published someone must think it's pretty good—good enough to be published anyway.
Goatbreath: I still think it's a hoax. Jassy Melson have a book published? Come on. It's a joke. I mean, have you read anything he's written?
Horserump: Other than a few poems by him, no, I haven't.
Goatbreath: Take it from me, his writing sucks. Just like his attitude does.
Horserump: What about his attitude?
Goatbreath: Oh, he comes on like he's some kind of professional writer and he's going to impart his great wisdom and experience about writing to all the peons on the site.
Cowdung: He is full of himself, isn't he.
Horserump: If I didn't know any better, I'd say you're jealous.
Goatbreath and Cowdung (in unison): Jealous!
Goatbreath: Jealous of what?
Horserump: Oh, maybe jealous of his talent.
Goatbreath: He has no talent!
Cowdung: I agree. He hides behind his limp words, and he gets angry if anyone disagrees with him.
Goatbreath: Have you read any of his posts? It's enough to make you, for want of a better word, puke.
Cowdung: He's always tooting his own horn.
Goatbreath: Yes, and it's lousy notes he plays.
(Goatbreath and Cowdung laugh at Goatbreath's excellent put-down of Jassy Melson.)
Horserump: Well, I still say that someone must have seen some merit in his writing to publish it.
Goatbreath: And I still think it's a hoax.
Cowdung: I agree. I think it's a rumor, and you know how rumors are. Once they get started, they're hard to stop.
Goatbreath: If Jassy Melson has had a book published, I'll eat my shorts.
Horserump: Would you like fries with that?
Cowdung: So you believe he has had a book published?
Horserump: Why not? There have been all kinds of books published.
Goatbreath: If Jassy Melson has had a book published entitled The Happy Demise of Hidy the Clown and Other Stories, it will make me lose faith in the publishing business.
Cowdung: Me too.
Horserump: I'm sure of it now.
Goatbreath: Sure of what?
Horserump: That you're merely jealous. You put his writing down without even having read it.
Goatbreath: There's no use in it. I know it will be bad.
Horserump: How do you know?
Goatbreath: I just know, that's all.
Horserump: That's no answer.
Goatbreath: It's the only one I'm going to give.
Cowdung: It's good enough for me.
Horserump: Not for me.
Goatbreath: Why are you taking up for Jassy Melson anyway? You were one of the most critical denunciators of his posts
Horserump: I'm not taking up for him. It's just not right to put down someone's work that you haven't even read, that's all.
Goatbreath: I'm not putting down his work. I'm simply criticizing something I know is bad.
Horserump: If you don't know what you're doing is wrong, then there's no use in me telling you anything.
Goatbreath: Don't tell me anything anyway. I don't care.
Cowdung: Neither do I. (to Horserump) I think you're taking up for a lousy writer.
Horserump: How would you know? You haven't read his work either.
Cowdung: Like Goatbreath, I don't have to read his work.
Horserump: You two are unbelievable.
Goatbreath: No, we're not. We're just truthful, that's all.
Horserump: Unreal.
Cowdung: No, but Jassy Melson's writing is.
(Goatbreath and Cowdung laugh at Cowdung's excellent putdown of Jassy Melson.)
Horserump: You know what you make me want to do?
Cowdung: What's that?
Horserump: Read Jassy Melson's work.
Goatbreath: That would be your misfortune; not ours.
(Again they laugh.)
Horserump: I'm leaving you two with your prejudice. (He departs.)
Cowdung: Don't go away mad.
Goatbreath: Just go away.
(Yet again they laugh.)
Cowdung: I guess we told him.
Goatbreath: Yes, we did.
(Jassy Melson enters.)
Jassy Melson: Hi. I heard you two don't like Jassy Melson's work.
Goatbreath: Who are you?
Jassy Melson: Just someone who overhears people talk.
Cowdung: You look familiar.
Jassy Melson: I should. I'm what you could call a gadfly.
Cowdung: A who?
Jassy Melson: Never mind.
Goatbreath: Don't worry, we won't
(Again Horsebreath and Cowdung laugh at Horsebreath's excellent put down of Jassy Melson.)
Jassy Melson: Something tells me that here we go again.

The End (Let's not beat a dead horse.)
P.S. Guess who's laughing last?

Anton Hermes
12-12-2012, 06:17 PM
Horserump: I looked it up. There is a book that's been newly published by Tanasi Press entitled The Happy Demise of Hidy the Clown and Other Stories. I even checked the ISBN number on it. There's no doubt about it. It's been published.
Cowdung: Hard to believe.

Very hard to believe. Link?

Jassy Melson
12-12-2012, 06:48 PM
Look it up yourself. I don't have time to fool around.

hillwalker
12-12-2012, 07:01 PM
Jassy, are you that desperate to blow your own trumpet? God help us!

H

miyako73
12-12-2012, 07:06 PM
Jassy, the clown is tired. Let's move on.

Jassy Melson
12-12-2012, 07:07 PM
Ha ha ha

Anton Hermes
12-12-2012, 07:28 PM
Look it up yourself. I don't have time to fool around.

I did look it up, and got zilch.

Look, as an aspiring writer myself, if you did publish Hidy the Clown, I'd congratulate you.

But by the looks of it, you're fooling around. And so I will continue to mock you.

Jassy Melson
12-23-2012, 02:35 PM
Your mocking is in vain. I got the last laugh. And you do realize don't you that by your mocking you are assuming a role in the trilogue?

hillwalker
12-23-2012, 03:32 PM
There's 4 of us, including yourself, debating the desperate measures you will go to in order to self-promote. So does that make it the quadrilogue?

I tend to think that's a hollow laugh I can hear. Merry Christmas JM.

H

Jassy Melson
12-23-2012, 05:03 PM
There are only three characters on the "stage" at one time, so that makes it a trilogue.
My last laugh was enough.

jayat
02-20-2013, 02:57 PM
The beginning remind me Led Zeppelin song Heartbreaker which begans "Hey, fellas, have you heart the news? Do you know Annie is back in town...." But no

Jassy Melson
02-21-2013, 05:39 PM
I love Led Zeppelin. You might find it interesting that The Happy Demise of Hidy the Clown and Other Stories is now going through its second printing. HAHAHA

Delta40
02-22-2013, 02:47 PM
Why you need to tell us this is because of that awful accident you had involving a knife a potato peeler and your penis

Paulclem
02-22-2013, 03:44 PM
You know what Jassy - the dialogue you wrote is the best thing I've seen from you. I'm serious - why don't you try writing in this mode for a change?

Just had a look and found it.

http://www.nydailynews.com/news/national/joke-man-inherits-13k-item-clown-collection-article-1.1172595

Jassy Melson
02-22-2013, 04:21 PM
Thank you. I occasionally write dialogues, which oftentimes leads to my writing of plays. The thing is, I will be 66 in July, and I find that I must limit the types of writng I do. I have just about given up the composing of poems. I mainly concentrate on the writing of short stories, and prose poems.

cacian
02-27-2013, 12:23 PM
Is the title taken from the french ''qui rira bien rira le dernier''?

Jassy Melson
02-28-2013, 05:24 PM
Nospeakadafrenchie

cacian
03-01-2013, 03:07 AM
Nospeakadafrenchie

Hi Jessie the French reads 'one that laughs loud laughs last' :)

Jassy Melson
03-01-2013, 02:23 PM
Ah, thank you very much for the translation. I suppose I was pretty loud in the dialogue I wrote, but I think, at the risk of boasting, that it turned out fairly good. It got some good "angry" reactions.

cacian
03-01-2013, 03:10 PM
Ah, thank you very much for the translation. I suppose I was pretty loud in the dialogue I wrote, but I think, at the risk of boasting, that it turned out fairly good. It got some good "angry" reactions.

Indeed any reaction is better then none. Of course one could also think that no reaction is also good. It all depends on how we feel on the day :)

Jassy Melson
03-02-2013, 04:24 PM
I agree one hundred percent

Jassy Melson
03-08-2013, 01:26 AM
I find it interesting that none of you young ones can keep up with a sixty-five-year-old man. The Happy Demise of Hidy the Clown and Other Stories is now going through its second printing. Ha ha ha.

Jassy Melson
03-08-2013, 01:32 AM
deleted by Jassy Melson because it was a repeat of the first quote by me.

cacian
03-08-2013, 05:46 AM
There is more youngester then you can shake a stick at. I guess it is their loss hey ;)

Paulclem
03-09-2013, 05:06 PM
I find it interesting that none of you young ones can keep up with a sixty-five-year-old man. The Happy Demise of Hidy the Clown and Other Stories is now going through its second printing. Ha ha ha.

This thread says a lot about you including the way you've revived a dead discussion. I find it interesting that a sixty five year old man feels the need to compete with younger ones. So what's your measured, mature and literary response going to be?

hillwalker
03-10-2013, 07:44 AM
Who would want to 'keep up' with such a self-centred, delusional individual anyway?

Do you seriously believe that you're the only published author on Lit Net?????????????????

H

Lokasenna
03-10-2013, 08:33 AM
Curiously, a quick Google search for 'The Happy Demise of Hidy the Clown and Other Stories' turns up only this thread. You may want to consider an alternative PR campaign. Unless, of course, your sole method of advertising is to pop up on this forum and condescend at we lesser mortals.

Jassy Melson
03-10-2013, 09:54 AM
I'm doing a pretty good job of advertising. I've sold a lot of books. I know what I'm doing. I think I'll keep it up. You all really seem to like it, and I wouldn't want to spoil your fun.

Jack of Hearts
03-10-2013, 10:45 AM
Deep breath, Jassy. Everything is ok.








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cacian
03-10-2013, 11:37 AM
I do not know about laughing but it is definetely not the last.
What say you Jassy you are the top man? ;)

Volya
03-10-2013, 03:07 PM
I always wondered why Jassy doesn't get banned for trolling. He's never provided any evidence that he's had any book published.

hillwalker
03-10-2013, 05:36 PM
I always wondered why Jassy doesn't get banned for trolling. He's never provided any evidence that he's had any book published.

You can't get banned on here for being delusional - it seems to be a prerequisite of Lit Net membership nowadays.

H

cafolini
03-10-2013, 06:04 PM
You can't get banned on here for being delusional - it seems to be a prerequisite of Lit Net membership nowadays.

H

It might be a good thing to learn so much about the insane. Imagine all we could miss if they were banned.

Shaman_Raman
03-10-2013, 06:45 PM
So...did Horserump come back with a review on the book?

Jassy Melson
03-11-2013, 09:13 AM
Not yet. He was so overwhelmed by the book that he has yet to write a review of it. Don't forget, this is a trilogue. Even Plato wrote fiction based on fact. As a member of the growing democratic mob - which Plato viewed with horror and revulsion because he was a member of the aristocracy - I demand to be taken seriously, and I know where you live, so don't try to pull a slick one on me. Hey, folks, it's fiction--don't forget that.