e based on my personal feelings on religion,pls no critisicm due to low IQ's

[scrotera777]

Rrrrr

[Jerrybaldy]

Who's low IQ? The reader's? The writer doesn't seem intelligent, so so is it yours? Whoever we are talking about this is complete twaddle at best. If you dont wish to be critiqued don't post.

[Pete Ak]

This reads as if you've composed a whole bunch of quasi poetic phrases and randomly fused them into sentences. It's a coincidence that some of them fuse in a grammatically acceptable way, unfortunately few of them do so in a way that prompts meaning.
What you've written in the title box, (I'm sure that isn't the title of the poem) felt like an insult. Though it doesn't actually say so, I read it as 'don't criticise my work if you have an IQ lower than mine'... admittedly I'm not 100% sure if that's what's intended but if I thought that's what you meant many others will have too.

Honestly Scrotera... that's the complete opposite of the way to engage on a board like this and I for one won't accept that because somebody's told you you have a psychological disorder, it gives you the right to trample on people's sensitivities. Unfortunately all it'll mean is that you become a sideshow. You might think the joke's on us, we think you're a joke - neither of us has any real satisfaction in such a stand -off, energy is wasted on pointless, internet rants.
I'd urge you to continue, use your art to find a way through your troubles, smile even though you may not feel much like smiling and the world (and us) will smile back.