Consciousness

[Disphoriac]

Bewildered I am,
and I think,
Is there, Oh God,
Anything more tormenting,
Other than,
an alive consciousness..???

[YesNo]

Nice way of putting this. I tend to think of consciousness as something abstract, but it can be tormenting. It should not be taken for granted even when it is not tormenting.

[cacian]

Indeed a simple but deep piece.
Consciousness is life and that is worth fighting for.

[Disphoriac]

Nice way of putting this. I tend to think of consciousness as something abstract, but it can be tormenting. It should not be taken for granted even when it is not tormenting.

Thanks for reviewing and putting this comment.

[Disphoriac]

Indeed a simple but deep piece.
Consciousness is life and that is worth fighting for.

thanks for appreciation cacian.
Blessings!

[Pete Ak]

That which torments you is the very thing with which you realise you are being tormented! Fascinating little piece raising quite a few abstractions of consciousness!!(i.e. thoughts!)

[Disphoriac]

Pete Ak you've just reached the point which compelled me to write this...
thanks in abundance!