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munkinhead
12-08-2012, 07:50 PM
Did I start and die?
Does this dissolution of red and green
produce a heaven solid enough to gain my feet?

The flutter of my eyelids,
where is that revolution?

I still feel the Earth,
and all its impossible colors.

hillwalker
12-09-2012, 07:16 AM
Cryptic and intriguing as usual - who knows how your mind works, or even cares as long as you keep producing poetry like this?

H

munkinhead
12-12-2012, 01:07 PM
Perhaps this edit makes it less cryptic.
Now it is a Christmas poem.