art talk

[cacian]

art is a cracker
it quivers
strattas in second
matter
and
liberates flatter
in sequence pattern
a visual
fracas
to pastime pradas
a true ingrata
to distant sagas

[firefangled]

I'm not sure I understand this completely, if at all (not necessarily your fault).

Prada hangs me up, because the only Prada I know of is the designer (who is the devil, I understand). It reminds me of a Kay Ryan poem and seems to be about comparing the endurance of art to the disintegration of a cracker. An interesting thought. I'm not sure that idea holds true in the long run, if this is it. There is quite a store of art that has endured centuries. That being said, I still think this is interesting. The thing about Kay Ryan is she does this without really stretching words too much and often the rhymes go unnoticed the first read, which I think is difficult to do consistently.

[hillwalker]

I'm not sure I understand this completely, if at all (not necessarily your fault).

It's a cacian poem - you're not meant to undertsand a word of it. :smilewinkgrin:

H

[cacian]

firefangled thank you for the concise feedback and yes indeed I could not have described it better myself. Thank you.

[cacian]

It's a cacian poem - you're not meant to undertsand a word of it. :smilewinkgrin:

H
:blush2: :D