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Little Gal
12-02-2012, 10:02 AM
How do you hold a ray in the middle of a leaf?
Or a beginning ripple from itself?
How do you hold a river from burying deep
Stories for its banks to hear and tell.
How can you tell a young wind from a breeze
How long can you stir a twig that floats alone
How can you keep a colour in your mind
And not let it touch once upon your songs
How can you run, and run on till you can’t
And wait how long for the way to stop and turn
How can you keep me spreading my wings in you
And you still be you, when we have begun ?

Bar22do
12-02-2012, 10:09 AM
Fleeting moments, only a dreamer hopes to keep...

How can you keep me spreading my wings in you
And you still be you, when we have begun.

I particularly like the above lines.

Be happy, Little Wave.

Little Gal
12-02-2012, 01:03 PM
Fleeting moments, only a dreamer hopes to keep...

How can you keep me spreading my wings in you
And you still be you, when we have begun.

I particularly like the above lines.

Be happy, Little Wave.

Have been a dreamer for a long time.. somehow my reality now is more beautiful than what my dreams could conceive...
As always your response is warm , it makes me :)
thank you very much...
All happiness to you too!
:)

cafolini
12-02-2012, 01:38 PM
Very good, Little Gal. Love you too.

firefangled
12-02-2012, 03:44 PM
This poem makes me think it is about an unborn child. I like it...especially

How can you keep a colour in your mind
And not let it touch once upon your songs

Buh4Bee
12-02-2012, 09:02 PM
Little gal, this is full of sweet moments. I am very happy for you as you mentioned before that you are happy (in a relationship?). If so, that is a wonderful thing.

Little Gal
12-04-2012, 01:17 PM
Very good, Little Gal. Love you too.

Thank You... :)

Little Gal
12-04-2012, 01:18 PM
This poem makes me think it is about an unborn child. I like it...especially

How can you keep a colour in your mind
And not let it touch once upon your songs

well... it ofcourse can be interpreted that way... it is a 'happening inside your being'... whatever it is, it is special ..almost near divine...
Thank You :)

Little Gal
12-04-2012, 01:20 PM
Little gal, this is full of sweet moments. I am very happy for you as you mentioned before that you are happy (in a relationship?). If so, that is a wonderful thing.

With my heart... thank you, and yes you are right..
All my love..and best wishes to you!
:D

Buh4Bee
12-05-2012, 12:55 AM
So good! Be happy! Yes, I need best wishes as we proceed to produce number 2.

Little Gal
12-06-2012, 12:02 PM
So good! Be happy! Yes, I need best wishes as we proceed to produce number 2.

Congratulations!!! this is so incredible! :) so happy for you.. and yes you have my warmest best wishes! :)