Last Night

[miyako73]

I saw heaven
But found no angels,
No prophets, no saints,
No Jesus, no god.

I asked around
The way to hell;
They all told me,
"Go back to earth."

[Delta40]

Unless this is going to be part of something greater Miyako - and you definitely have the skill to do that, the second stanza is too cliched as it is. too many people say this or believe that hell is earth.