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free
11-22-2012, 08:29 AM
I keep a notebook with crumbs of bread in it
Like grains of sand spilled over its pages
I open this tiny, sweet thing
Adorned with my handwriting
For lonely me to enjoy
And delicious food
For restless nightbirds to peck


P.S. Thanks, Delta, for reminding me to post a new poem. :wave:

cafolini
11-22-2012, 11:09 AM
"for restless night birds to peck"
Very good. Short, to the point.

Bar22do
11-22-2012, 06:51 PM
Original! A diary for you and the birds! Sweet.

free
11-23-2012, 07:28 AM
cafolini and Bar, thank you for reading, liking and commenting my poem. Best wishes to you.

PeterL
11-23-2012, 11:34 AM
Mmmm, mmmm that's some tasty food for pecking.

Delta40
11-23-2012, 05:52 PM
That was a nice morsel Free.

free
12-01-2012, 08:31 AM
Thanks, Peter and Delta. I am glad you like it.