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lolscourge
11-19-2012, 08:28 PM
Pot Ventriloquism

A father cries, caressing our fears -
Those hidden from what belittling we'd amount.
The unorthodox worries and scares,
Ignored by the crux of a whore's lie.

And Oh! To laugh at the boy that isn't scared of
the existing Man, not only with his peers but to you and I, strangers,
Terrified of the lunacy which he'd drive us all to.

Wrong, never right - and what we'd all call him -
This loner, feeling embarrassed and patronized by the hatred and cruelty
Of the vile, imbecilic bastard children that ruin the cities of the
Greatly modernistic people, and that
Cry out for labour-driven communities and use love as an excuse,

What have they,
To say I am no more than that, or this of theirs – a
Perspective none but all agree to decide with
And moralize against.

And Oh! But hear this - He's done no wrong! Let Him fight his mental shroud
of nastiness and pot ventriloquism,
His pedophilic and hell-ridden scum will fall away man by man,
to the depths of a fire that bears no mercy.

Because you will watch.

You will pray.

And you will fall away with them.

Sreenan
11-19-2012, 09:29 PM
Bravo! Love it! All of it! You're really good. Very strong words and emotion in it.

lolscourge
11-20-2012, 04:03 AM
Ah, thank you very much. Praise is always nice.

I do have question, though - is it too obscure? Or, contrarily, can you easily draw the point the poem is making? You see, this was my aim; to make the reader think about what I'm writing, allowing for some interpretability, and allowing it to be unique for each person - but still having a blatantly solid core behind it's objective.

Can you tell me what you think it's about?