This life I do not call mine

[blazeofglory]

I love to call it mine
Everything rimming me
I love to proliferate interminably beyond worldly bounds
I want to abound and sit everybody at my feet
I pray so that I attain godhood
My colossal manifestations cherry-pick every force
My supremacy intends to reign spaciously
This in all its bluntness is sheer ego-engorging
All else is borrowed
Beneath the layers
I am a sheer lump of something
Born of paternal urges
A throng of sensuous touches
That quivered the privates of a woman
A hysteric outburst commingling pains and gains
I am a conclusion of somebody’s brief sexual exaltation
Lost in thought I vainly look for a nexus
An axis that annexes me with eternity
What I call mine is a downright ego
Once the ego goes peeled off
I bounce down the stair of life
To realize the lump I actually am

[cacian]

Haha this is almost comical at times it did make me laugh.
It is superbly written with an excellent flow.

A hysteric outburst commingling pains and gains
I am a conclusion of somebody’s brief sexual exaltation
Lost in thought I vainly look for a nexus
An axis that annexes me with eternity

These are brilliant lines blazeglory but to tell you the truth the whole poem is together beautifully expressed.
May I say however that you last line is very funny in a nice way, but as a friend I must add that I am pretty that you much more then that.:)

[blazeofglory]

Your words mean a million and is a great fount of inspiration. Poetry is born when it finds an inspiration and grows when it finds a fertile ground like the way you generally makes a review. I am in fact not good at crafting a good poem and in spite of that I keep on writing poems when a good writer like you puts forth something treasurable. English is my second language and to claim efficiency over it is laughable. I cannot play with appropriate words and yet the instincts are powerful and I cannot help it

[cacian]

wow blazeglory I thought you were English I really did.
What can I say you pull it off rather well. I enjoy your poetries they are all fun to read.