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cacian
11-15-2012, 10:20 AM
I love reading little snapshots of stories or poems. They are a fun to learn to imagine the stories behind it.
Why not post your last thoughts/sentence/piece you wrote today.
Here is mine from yesterday:
''as he climbed into the bed he dreamed he could have flown an aeroplane''
xtianfriborg13
11-15-2012, 10:47 PM
Anything for you, madam. :)
Any Questions?
After lecturing for two hours on English Lit 1660-1789. Try explaining naturalist philosophy to Chinese undergrads. Awful!.
Dark Muse
11-16-2012, 10:52 PM
And even if you feel like you want to tear the whole thing apart when you get to the end, you still feel an undeniable sense of accomplishment.
WritingWrongs
11-17-2012, 02:21 AM
I knew not a soul he slighted—though I did heed the fact that he, also of formidable frame, trampled over the same grass and leaves in the well-trodden paths to our school as I did.
Dark Muse
11-17-2012, 03:33 AM
You remain unapproachable
as distant as a statue,
when I touch you
you are cold,
and I most provide all the fire
but you refused resolutely to be warmed,
though your mind I may devour,
earnestly you spill it over
your body remains beyond my touch,
and your heart is a puzzle box that I cannot solve.
cacian
11-17-2012, 03:41 AM
''propriety never failed and all the same he could feel the air floating as he imagined what would come next''
Lokasenna
11-17-2012, 04:27 AM
'There was something macabre there, a sense of something simultaneously bodily and spiritual, and repugnant on both accounts.'
Delta40
11-17-2012, 07:04 AM
my last sentence and unfortunately an embarrasment is:
The boldest of truths beat as quickly as the heart of a cicada
and such truth threatens to capsize the potential upon which we float.
(For God sake don't ask!)
dark desire
11-17-2012, 07:58 AM
Last line won't make sense. Last few lines are the following:
Further away from the second tribe was another tribe that has had a shrine from one of the earlier fools of the lineage. It was inherently crooked through some twist of fate. It was both cruel and hypocritical; it was both wealthy and beastly. It was more beastly and presented itself as more civilized. It was some miracle that the world got convinced as well.
cacian
11-17-2012, 05:27 PM
''so much so that it became evident the time had runeth. Would he live to seek another day was very much the headlines on his mind''
Dark Muse
11-18-2012, 02:29 AM
Rise to the occasion
embrace the hunger which consumes your soul
tremble not before them
but let them drink from the dregs
of your cruelty.
Lykren
11-21-2012, 12:03 AM
Curled helplessly
my thoughts smashed
slowly swimming
beneath a pale moon
praying
Forgiveness.
cacian
11-21-2012, 05:23 AM
Lykren that is a beautiful piece.
''the speakers resounded in the background as the sound of the flute played a soothing tune. It was the dejavu again''
cacian
11-22-2012, 02:29 PM
''as he rose from his bed he thought it was a dream. It was''
Alexander III
11-22-2012, 03:09 PM
Francesco walked up to the small white door with the number twenty-two on it, he knocked twice and twice again, Kristopher opened the door from the inside and turned his back and went to the living room to lie down on his couch; "what did you think?" Kristopher lit a cigarette and answered "Your writing is a lot like my sex life buddy, ninety-five percent masturbation for personal pleasure and five percent good fvcking for the benefit of another; but when it comes to masturbation I don't do the deed in the living-room. As a citizen of the world, I have found out that a guy becomes drastically less pleasant as soon as he starts masturbating in the comunal areas."
cacian
11-25-2012, 06:07 AM
''the light left the passage ways the moon hid behind the clouds and the night was plunged in a silent dark''
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