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Delta40
11-14-2012, 05:16 PM
In cobwebbed corners
I recall those moments

Lived right there
then swept away as quickly

as you had scurried
down the drainpipe

before it meant anything

Yet always the memory of you
dangled from the next rising sun

to pose her own questions

I got lost in remnants of love
and unwritten lines

You wondered out loud
what creature am I?

MystyrMystyry
11-15-2012, 05:35 AM
Spyder, spyder
Causing fright
In my dunny
Around midnight


Very good Delta :)

Yet always the memory of you
dangled from the next rising sun

Sometimes you hit on a perfect turn of phrase, like this :)

cafolini
11-15-2012, 02:35 PM
Time to visit you, Delta. Very good piece.

Delta40
11-15-2012, 04:54 PM
Thank you

Bar22do
11-15-2012, 06:19 PM
A very good piece again, Delta. I feel you leave me no choice, but to repeat myself!