la vie

[cacian]

the pivotal role
I see it as goal
to soirees of gold
music is toll
to people of souls
the ambiance is world
to a perfect indoors
and life is en forme
with the meaning of love

[Bar22do]

... for how would life be, without love.

[DocHeart]

PAINFULLY bad, cacian. PAINFULLY bad.

Have you ever considered doing something else with your time -- something that is FAR AWAY from attempting poetry, something like batik, or collecting empty nail varnish vials? I think your potential is wasted here.

I apologize, and promise to stay well away from your personal poetry contributions in future.

Best health,
DH

[cacian]

Oh wow DocHeart inexcusable but valid. This never happened to me before. I guess there is a first moment to everything and this is it I have put you off and for that I apologise for that was not the meaning.
I write with something to say and so painfully bad if you do not like it.
I contribute nothing I add something. This makes sense to me.