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[Jack of Hearts]

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[E.A Rumfield]

I think I get what you are trying to say but it might work better if you slowed it down.

[Bar22do]

Complex system theory would be helpful here, at least for me. but I always like to ponder what lies in the background of your verse. Encore, encore!

[DocHeart]

You disregard and discard subject, verb and object like shoes that are too tight.

[Jack of Hearts]

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[Bar22do]

Jack, again? but I 'caught' it and am trying to reach beyond the smoke... to meet HER. For it must have been quite a meeting.

[Jerrybaldy]

that one word poem of yours Jack is getting right on my tits.

[Jack of Hearts]

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[Jack of Hearts]

i think i just wrote my first poem

[Jerrybaldy]

i think i just wrote my first poem


Jack. Jack. come on back.

[AuntShecky]

Minimalism redux!

[Bar22do]

Jack, I loved your last one and it reminded me of my only visit to Bordeaux! (un peu trop bourgeois pour mon goût!)! always good to read you, anyhow.