nipper
11-11-2012, 09:13 AM
-- This is just me looking for feed back on this particular character I am working on.
Also just a warning its been a solid year since I have wrote anything so please help me get back on track. --
"The idea of perpetual motion has always been possible, but there would be no point in doing it. The only reason people want it is to generate power. What they don't understand though is that to make electricity you need friction. Friction is what makes the device stop though. Of course though no one else sees this they think it just all needs more work, more math, or more ideas. Just idiotic people working on an idiotic device. Of course people are just like the thing so it seems suiting.I mean think about it. All the successful people leave a destructive trail in there wake brought on by the friction they had to make to generate there power. Not that it will last long and once its out they start causing more friction in the world. Everyone else though is worse because they try to be like a perpetual motion device. They try to get a little power on no friction. This gets them no where though. So in the terms of our generation you can either be a jerk or a push over. Such great options. Just the type of options that get all of us undergrads stuck in a rut with dead end jobs like flipping burgers. So just to recap perpetual motion devices are a useless idea and perpetual motion people are worse."
"Mike, your lunch break ended ten minutes ago. Get back to the grill or we will start docking time again"
"Ok boss I am walking to the grill as we speak. I mean who needs to right a final paper for a physics class."
"Not you because you got work to do! Aint like you will pass with that trash anyways."
"Whatever you say boss."
I swear this guy is a neanderthal. Size of an ox with the IQ of a flea, Jeff is what all idiots who couldn't get a high school diploma strive for. Manager of a Burger joint. Im just ready to get this shift over and get to my classes. As much as i hate to say it i did get off topic on the paper. I will just have to start over later.
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What are the point in teaching classes to those who don't get it. Stuck in a British Literature class with idiots is just irritating beyond all else. It isn't like we are doing something challenging like physics. That reminds me I got to get to the lab.
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Well this will be interesting we have a new student in our class. Its a little late in the year but its not my business. Seems a bit off a goth I mean she does have on a lot of black for someone who is in a class instead of a funeral. Wait a minute! Is she coming over here? Why is she sitting here there are other people she go can go be lab partners with.
"I will be working with you. My name is Rebecca. Try to make any moves on me and i will break your wrist."
"No worry there. You dont seem to be my type. My name is Mike."
"Ok then."
What a creep who starts a conversation like that. She is a freak and she can go jump off a .....
"So your reading on perpetual motion?"
"Hugh?"
" The book there on your desk numb nuts."
Why was she asking about what was on my desk, and were does she get off calling me numb nuts!
"Its for a research paper, and you ought to watch your mouth."
"Well you know its possible right."
"Yea but doesn't put out anything."
"Yea it does."
"Doesn't"
"How about a wager then?"
"Oh really what is it?"
"I make one tonight and bring it in and as long as it can spin you belong to me."
What the....... well this is weird but i know it would last only about five minutes so maybe i will do it.
"What do i get if I win?"
"I will leave you alone."
Well its a pretty safe bet but i need to take out the idea of her owning me those five minutes.
"Ok, but only on one condition. It has to go for longer than five minutes before you can own me."
"Deal."
Well this made class a little more interesting. It should give me a good laugh for tomorrow.
-- I know this needs serious fleshing out, right now im looking for more focus on the characters and concept itself.--
Also just a warning its been a solid year since I have wrote anything so please help me get back on track. --
"The idea of perpetual motion has always been possible, but there would be no point in doing it. The only reason people want it is to generate power. What they don't understand though is that to make electricity you need friction. Friction is what makes the device stop though. Of course though no one else sees this they think it just all needs more work, more math, or more ideas. Just idiotic people working on an idiotic device. Of course people are just like the thing so it seems suiting.I mean think about it. All the successful people leave a destructive trail in there wake brought on by the friction they had to make to generate there power. Not that it will last long and once its out they start causing more friction in the world. Everyone else though is worse because they try to be like a perpetual motion device. They try to get a little power on no friction. This gets them no where though. So in the terms of our generation you can either be a jerk or a push over. Such great options. Just the type of options that get all of us undergrads stuck in a rut with dead end jobs like flipping burgers. So just to recap perpetual motion devices are a useless idea and perpetual motion people are worse."
"Mike, your lunch break ended ten minutes ago. Get back to the grill or we will start docking time again"
"Ok boss I am walking to the grill as we speak. I mean who needs to right a final paper for a physics class."
"Not you because you got work to do! Aint like you will pass with that trash anyways."
"Whatever you say boss."
I swear this guy is a neanderthal. Size of an ox with the IQ of a flea, Jeff is what all idiots who couldn't get a high school diploma strive for. Manager of a Burger joint. Im just ready to get this shift over and get to my classes. As much as i hate to say it i did get off topic on the paper. I will just have to start over later.
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What are the point in teaching classes to those who don't get it. Stuck in a British Literature class with idiots is just irritating beyond all else. It isn't like we are doing something challenging like physics. That reminds me I got to get to the lab.
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Well this will be interesting we have a new student in our class. Its a little late in the year but its not my business. Seems a bit off a goth I mean she does have on a lot of black for someone who is in a class instead of a funeral. Wait a minute! Is she coming over here? Why is she sitting here there are other people she go can go be lab partners with.
"I will be working with you. My name is Rebecca. Try to make any moves on me and i will break your wrist."
"No worry there. You dont seem to be my type. My name is Mike."
"Ok then."
What a creep who starts a conversation like that. She is a freak and she can go jump off a .....
"So your reading on perpetual motion?"
"Hugh?"
" The book there on your desk numb nuts."
Why was she asking about what was on my desk, and were does she get off calling me numb nuts!
"Its for a research paper, and you ought to watch your mouth."
"Well you know its possible right."
"Yea but doesn't put out anything."
"Yea it does."
"Doesn't"
"How about a wager then?"
"Oh really what is it?"
"I make one tonight and bring it in and as long as it can spin you belong to me."
What the....... well this is weird but i know it would last only about five minutes so maybe i will do it.
"What do i get if I win?"
"I will leave you alone."
Well its a pretty safe bet but i need to take out the idea of her owning me those five minutes.
"Ok, but only on one condition. It has to go for longer than five minutes before you can own me."
"Deal."
Well this made class a little more interesting. It should give me a good laugh for tomorrow.
-- I know this needs serious fleshing out, right now im looking for more focus on the characters and concept itself.--