My song chorus

[misterreplicant]

"For You"

I’ll always be there for you
As long as the skies are blue
And you know it’s true
That I’ll always be there for you

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What do you think? I'm not so sure about the 2nd line, but I'd love to hear your thoughts on it.
The song is based around me telling a girl I'm always going to be there for her, as you might be able to tell.

Thanks!

[hillwalker]

Scarily unoriginal and hopelessly repetitive - which means it will probably make a great song for Justin Bieber.

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[Buh4Bee]

I think this is more of a joke than someone being serious.