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sikt
11-08-2012, 11:01 PM
Hello it's been a long time since I've written anything. About 15mins before going to bed last night I thought I would give it a go. Not sure what it should be called it's more of a paragraph then a short story.

As the light creeps to the edge of darkness the fear of what was dissapates. Flick of a switch could turn the tide, reverse what could of been. You must ask yourself was it worth to see it all in the light of day? Laying softly within the shadows could of been the truth you wished you never knew. From the abyss of night comes the dissolution of sight, blindness could be the gift many wish for. Vibrant and Stunning, the awe and amazement is like hands reaching out to lead the way. Radiant, welcoming the scatter of light can be. Gushing to every crevice, engulfing what was shroded in the viel of the night. Is this the comfort you seek? Some don't belong here, overwhelming the temptation of sight can be. Lustful it can be to see with out understanding. Some have tasted it, some have understood it and others will forever seek what they have abondonded, not knowing that they will chase the day where no comfort will be found.

sarah.nichole
11-09-2012, 11:07 AM
I'm not entirely sure what this is supposed to be about? I feel like it's someone talking about being afraid of the dark in a very round about way.

One correction though:
Flick of a switch could turn the tide, reverse what could of been.
Laying softly within the shadows could of been the truth you wished you never knew.

Those should both say could have been.