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hallaig
11-05-2012, 10:36 AM
Tasha is just out of poets’ school,
where she was Head Girl,
and Bridget and Dan have the same hat.
They say I’m authentic
but I’m merely filthy drunk
and hanging about the refreshments
because if the Merlot’s run out already
there’s going to be trouble.
I read last, as the rest have somewhere to go,
and because there’s swearing in mine.
What do they think I am, a token Scotsman,
some kind of caricature?
I give a small, angry stagger.
Isn’t it odd, I say to a total stranger,
the number of Scottish drunks
in TV Drama? Outraged, I spend
the rest of the night
teaching a woman in a wheelchair
the right way to say get tae ****.

Hawkman
11-05-2012, 10:46 AM
I really like this. A good angry poem :D Not a word out of place (except the last one... How do you pronounce that exactly? ;))

Live and be well - H

Bar22do
11-05-2012, 07:00 PM
Very vivid, I can feel the guy's hostility! though I can only guess what "tae ****" is (but is it?).

Reading you is always thought provoking! Thanks a lot.

hallaig
11-06-2012, 04:32 AM
It's a true story, I was that man. I think your guess is right.

Delta40
11-06-2012, 05:10 AM
Lol. One immediately got the impression this was taken from real life and it just rolled off the page as easily as if I was actually in the room feeling the tension Hallaig.