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11-02-2012, 08:35 AM
Rating: M
Word Count: 1400
Feedback: Does it leave a sense of mystery? Is it realistic like you're really reading a chatlog of two different people with different personalities talking? Is it interesting, as in would you want to know what happens next or even what happened their first conversation?
Author's Comments: The secret is thought out btw... Would you prefer to continue reading on with the conversation between christian and philip or would you prefer to know what philip has been through and read from when he first met Tony?
A teenager called "Chistian" meets another teenager online for the first time called "Philip". After talking to Philip for a little while he realises that Philip seems to be hiding something and asks christian if he is willing to join him without revealing what's going on. If chris joins however he won't every be able to turn back. The conversation snippet begins just when Philip feels like its time to reveal at least something to Chris. Below is their first conversation which is set in march 2012.
March 2012
Philip: The stuff I'm about to write would sound crazy to me if I were to read it a year ago.
Christian: Well I'll probably be kind of shocked, but I do have a matrix kind of view of LIFE so no I am just jealous that I can't meet "THE Morpheus" myself
Philip: The whole situation I am in right now is crazy... Its weird knowing when and how I am supposed to die and then cheating death
Christian: Wow! "I know why you're here, Neo. I know what you've been doing... why you hardly sleep, why you live alone, and why night after night, you sit by your computer. You're looking for him. I know because I was once looking for the same thing. And when he found me, he told me I wasn't really looking for him. I was looking for an answer. It's the question that drives us, Neo. It's the question that brought you here." That quote bugs the hell out of me
Philip: Yea, It's interesting that once you get answers you don't want them. The terrible things I know yet now wish I didn't…
Christian: Hmm do you think I should stay out of it?
Philip: Well it's up to you and how you personally feel. It's just that I can't tell you without not telling you.
Christian: Yeah I get it the red pill and the blue pill haha
Philip: Technically I can live through that situation. If I want I can go back to 2008 and never meet Phanes and reset everything back to then as if everything I have experienced since then was a dream but whether I take that choice or not is a hard one. If I do that I die in 2013 just after finishing highschool and starting a career as a programmer. It's just a difficult choice. You see if you knew the alternative you would go crazy and say "I want in"
Christian: I have been waiting for something like this to happend my entire life. I even had a lesson in religion where I talked about how to go to the "dreamland" and talk to entites to gain knowledge but it was just for fun. So this kind of shocks me, but I am more than ready… Ok maybe not, but I will take the red pill so to speak
Philip: Ok, Well I am not the one to decide if you "join" us or not but If you talk to phanes I guess we could get you set up. I have lived in denial since October 2011 when I found out about this but slowly things got proven...
Christian: Yeah I can understand that. I have a really twisted view on life really. If eternity really exists, then life is really short and no matter what we do it won't matter.
Philip: The creepiest thing is when I sent a private message to Cking to ask him a personal question and suddenly he's like "I know who you are" and he says everything I know suddenly
Christian: Wow, Goodbye personal life?
Philip: I know It freaked me out
Christian: Well then I guess he CAN really decide if I Am ready or not
Philip: The thing is he suddenly became unpossessed... something was talking through him. It's like as soon as I talked to him something controlled him and then suddenly after that he acted different. He is not a part of us or one of us... It's just that something was in him that knew things I have never written down
Christian: This sounds awfully like Insidious
Philip: Yea I saw that movie but it's not!
Christian: Ok good! I am sceptical of course. Like you I'll need proof
Philip: yea... like I was. How would you feel If suddenly someone appeared in your room... like teleported right now (It's not gonna happen) but would that prove it to you
Christian: No, I experience that all the time... Of course it would!
Philip: yea... That's what Phanes is gonna do for me in 3 months
Christian: Scary! If this is true of course I want to be a part of it but the problem is my doubt and my overanalyctic mind.
Philip: Exactly how I feel... it's just that now is a bad time because proof is hard to give. Once tony merges and gets his powers then boom... he can give any proof he wishes. Really I shouldn't tell you this but my powers will be physical time manipulation
Christian: What bothers me is that this sounds like a sect or something, without proof it's like any religion in the world unfortunately.
Philip: yea... exactly but the fact is that in 2013 proof will not be needed since the world itself will be proof.
Christian: So it's a conscious evolution, I have heard about that before though
Philip: Once almost everyone's dead and we show ourselves then It all changes. I just wish it didn't involve the death of so many
Christian: Ok that freaked me out but as it seems I have a weird view of moral as well, so nothing bothers me
Philip: If you know... you would be more shocked
Christian: yeah probably...
Philip: it's just I can't fully tell you everything… Its driving me nuts!
Christian: I know how you feel but just one thing that will work as proof to me for now. This doesn't cost money right?
Philip: What? No way!
Christian: Ok good then it's not a sect
Philip: It doesn't cost money but boy... Its gonna be a tough job! Just let me get this right... You want to be a part of this?
Christian: Yes, I am just sceptical that's all, but I WANT to believe it
Philip: Ok, I guess I'll tell you a few things
Christian: ok
Philip: Phanes is controlling his host tony. Tony is a guy in the USA who got an offer from someone just like I did. He was trained for free since money is nothing to do with this. Once training was complete he could enter the phase at will. Soon he discovered it wasn't just a mind creation. Him and his friend both trained at the same time but Tony suffered doubt. His friend Christopher followed it through and then that's where he got his proof. Christopher got physical powers! He could do cool things that no other human could do. Then that was it... Tony believed and now he's getting powers. The fact is that these Greek gods merge with humans. Christopher merged with Thanatos, Tony is merging with Phanes and I am resisting to merge with Chronos until I fully get over the doubt stage. Once I merge I get to physically time travel at will. I will be able to erase everything if I wish and be normal again... but if I do then the horrible future will happen.
Christian: Then you have the greatest power ?
Philip: Yea, But there's a catch! You know Yahweh... the christian god... he is real! He is against us and must be killed. Thats what frightens me. Killing a god I worshipped most of my life. I am terrified that I have to eventually kill him with the backup of Phanes, Pontus, Thanatos and the other 20 of us. You get why this is scary for me...
Christian: Yea, This was an eye-opener for me, although I am almost an atheist, I wish to believe
Philip: Yea but the christan god is horrible... so is heaven. It's boring in heaven and Yahweh rapes children secretly... It's hard to explain but it's terrifying and Hell is even worse! If hell is bad and heaven is bad then... the astral is kinda the best place to be. So you're basically stuck permanently in a lucid dream forever once you die. People go where they believe they will when they die because post death areas are controlled by thought. Anyway I'll give you Tony's msn: It's "********@hotmail.com". Say that Philip directed you. He may be mad that I revealed part of the truth though so I don't know how we will approach this... Maybe just say you're willing to join. Anyway sorry but I got to go now... Sadly I have left you unstable... you know enough to be in danger yet not enough to be safe. Sorry for that but hopefully you can contact Tony... Just add his email and then boom you're starting a journey that you can't turn back on... Technically If you asked me to erase this in the future I could but the consequence is that I would most likely have to relive everything from this day. Anyway good luck and talk to you next time. Bye!
So what do you think of this? Realistic? Interesting characters? Want to hear different parts of the story, earlier, later? Different people involved in this "thing"?
Word Count: 1400
Feedback: Does it leave a sense of mystery? Is it realistic like you're really reading a chatlog of two different people with different personalities talking? Is it interesting, as in would you want to know what happens next or even what happened their first conversation?
Author's Comments: The secret is thought out btw... Would you prefer to continue reading on with the conversation between christian and philip or would you prefer to know what philip has been through and read from when he first met Tony?
A teenager called "Chistian" meets another teenager online for the first time called "Philip". After talking to Philip for a little while he realises that Philip seems to be hiding something and asks christian if he is willing to join him without revealing what's going on. If chris joins however he won't every be able to turn back. The conversation snippet begins just when Philip feels like its time to reveal at least something to Chris. Below is their first conversation which is set in march 2012.
March 2012
Philip: The stuff I'm about to write would sound crazy to me if I were to read it a year ago.
Christian: Well I'll probably be kind of shocked, but I do have a matrix kind of view of LIFE so no I am just jealous that I can't meet "THE Morpheus" myself
Philip: The whole situation I am in right now is crazy... Its weird knowing when and how I am supposed to die and then cheating death
Christian: Wow! "I know why you're here, Neo. I know what you've been doing... why you hardly sleep, why you live alone, and why night after night, you sit by your computer. You're looking for him. I know because I was once looking for the same thing. And when he found me, he told me I wasn't really looking for him. I was looking for an answer. It's the question that drives us, Neo. It's the question that brought you here." That quote bugs the hell out of me
Philip: Yea, It's interesting that once you get answers you don't want them. The terrible things I know yet now wish I didn't…
Christian: Hmm do you think I should stay out of it?
Philip: Well it's up to you and how you personally feel. It's just that I can't tell you without not telling you.
Christian: Yeah I get it the red pill and the blue pill haha
Philip: Technically I can live through that situation. If I want I can go back to 2008 and never meet Phanes and reset everything back to then as if everything I have experienced since then was a dream but whether I take that choice or not is a hard one. If I do that I die in 2013 just after finishing highschool and starting a career as a programmer. It's just a difficult choice. You see if you knew the alternative you would go crazy and say "I want in"
Christian: I have been waiting for something like this to happend my entire life. I even had a lesson in religion where I talked about how to go to the "dreamland" and talk to entites to gain knowledge but it was just for fun. So this kind of shocks me, but I am more than ready… Ok maybe not, but I will take the red pill so to speak
Philip: Ok, Well I am not the one to decide if you "join" us or not but If you talk to phanes I guess we could get you set up. I have lived in denial since October 2011 when I found out about this but slowly things got proven...
Christian: Yeah I can understand that. I have a really twisted view on life really. If eternity really exists, then life is really short and no matter what we do it won't matter.
Philip: The creepiest thing is when I sent a private message to Cking to ask him a personal question and suddenly he's like "I know who you are" and he says everything I know suddenly
Christian: Wow, Goodbye personal life?
Philip: I know It freaked me out
Christian: Well then I guess he CAN really decide if I Am ready or not
Philip: The thing is he suddenly became unpossessed... something was talking through him. It's like as soon as I talked to him something controlled him and then suddenly after that he acted different. He is not a part of us or one of us... It's just that something was in him that knew things I have never written down
Christian: This sounds awfully like Insidious
Philip: Yea I saw that movie but it's not!
Christian: Ok good! I am sceptical of course. Like you I'll need proof
Philip: yea... like I was. How would you feel If suddenly someone appeared in your room... like teleported right now (It's not gonna happen) but would that prove it to you
Christian: No, I experience that all the time... Of course it would!
Philip: yea... That's what Phanes is gonna do for me in 3 months
Christian: Scary! If this is true of course I want to be a part of it but the problem is my doubt and my overanalyctic mind.
Philip: Exactly how I feel... it's just that now is a bad time because proof is hard to give. Once tony merges and gets his powers then boom... he can give any proof he wishes. Really I shouldn't tell you this but my powers will be physical time manipulation
Christian: What bothers me is that this sounds like a sect or something, without proof it's like any religion in the world unfortunately.
Philip: yea... exactly but the fact is that in 2013 proof will not be needed since the world itself will be proof.
Christian: So it's a conscious evolution, I have heard about that before though
Philip: Once almost everyone's dead and we show ourselves then It all changes. I just wish it didn't involve the death of so many
Christian: Ok that freaked me out but as it seems I have a weird view of moral as well, so nothing bothers me
Philip: If you know... you would be more shocked
Christian: yeah probably...
Philip: it's just I can't fully tell you everything… Its driving me nuts!
Christian: I know how you feel but just one thing that will work as proof to me for now. This doesn't cost money right?
Philip: What? No way!
Christian: Ok good then it's not a sect
Philip: It doesn't cost money but boy... Its gonna be a tough job! Just let me get this right... You want to be a part of this?
Christian: Yes, I am just sceptical that's all, but I WANT to believe it
Philip: Ok, I guess I'll tell you a few things
Christian: ok
Philip: Phanes is controlling his host tony. Tony is a guy in the USA who got an offer from someone just like I did. He was trained for free since money is nothing to do with this. Once training was complete he could enter the phase at will. Soon he discovered it wasn't just a mind creation. Him and his friend both trained at the same time but Tony suffered doubt. His friend Christopher followed it through and then that's where he got his proof. Christopher got physical powers! He could do cool things that no other human could do. Then that was it... Tony believed and now he's getting powers. The fact is that these Greek gods merge with humans. Christopher merged with Thanatos, Tony is merging with Phanes and I am resisting to merge with Chronos until I fully get over the doubt stage. Once I merge I get to physically time travel at will. I will be able to erase everything if I wish and be normal again... but if I do then the horrible future will happen.
Christian: Then you have the greatest power ?
Philip: Yea, But there's a catch! You know Yahweh... the christian god... he is real! He is against us and must be killed. Thats what frightens me. Killing a god I worshipped most of my life. I am terrified that I have to eventually kill him with the backup of Phanes, Pontus, Thanatos and the other 20 of us. You get why this is scary for me...
Christian: Yea, This was an eye-opener for me, although I am almost an atheist, I wish to believe
Philip: Yea but the christan god is horrible... so is heaven. It's boring in heaven and Yahweh rapes children secretly... It's hard to explain but it's terrifying and Hell is even worse! If hell is bad and heaven is bad then... the astral is kinda the best place to be. So you're basically stuck permanently in a lucid dream forever once you die. People go where they believe they will when they die because post death areas are controlled by thought. Anyway I'll give you Tony's msn: It's "********@hotmail.com". Say that Philip directed you. He may be mad that I revealed part of the truth though so I don't know how we will approach this... Maybe just say you're willing to join. Anyway sorry but I got to go now... Sadly I have left you unstable... you know enough to be in danger yet not enough to be safe. Sorry for that but hopefully you can contact Tony... Just add his email and then boom you're starting a journey that you can't turn back on... Technically If you asked me to erase this in the future I could but the consequence is that I would most likely have to relive everything from this day. Anyway good luck and talk to you next time. Bye!
So what do you think of this? Realistic? Interesting characters? Want to hear different parts of the story, earlier, later? Different people involved in this "thing"?