Flick

[rksingh]

shaped like a bird
a drop of water lands
on her breast
my breath jumps to kiss it
before her pelvic flick

--R.K.Singh

[hillwalker]

Liked this - 'pelvic flick' had me wondering whether she would be flicking a different part of her body, but it's a nice image all the same.

H

[Jack of Hearts]

Hey, not bad at all...





J

[Twota]

I only like the 1st 5 lines..

[The Inkwell]

I'm not sure about "pelvic flick," but I like the big picture.