religiously yours

[cacian]

religion
how does it
vision the truth
from the lies?
I see no reason to
making it
a mission if
eden was the place to born
its treason.

[Revolte]

A couple things I'm curious about. Do "born" and "Vision" work that way? I'm not sure and just want your reason for their use. On one hand born is past tense so I get that, however it reads as an action that almost feels present tense. In the sense that it draws you into being there.

I just woke up, forgive me lol.

Same idea with vision, can vision be used as an action?

In parts "vision the truth" sounds kinda strange. But if read fluently the entire piece seems to make sense.

It seems we found a rip in space time cacian, the bigger question here is what is on the other side? Space-Horse I hope.

[cacian]

Hi revolte thank you for reading.
I used 'born' and 'vision' without thinking and also I think they rhymed and had a better impact in what I wanted to reflect.
I tend to do that with words irrespectful of their tense to fit the mood of my writing.
I think poetry is about breaking rules this is how I feel about it.