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angliholic
10-19-2012, 01:19 AM
How I envy you
you dance and sip the drink of gods on the job
While you're sitting on a flower's top
will you meditate on the meaning of the color blue

hillwalker
10-19-2012, 07:40 AM
I like the closing line. Is it meant to be a question?

Not sure about 'on the job' though!

H

Hawkman
10-19-2012, 08:30 AM
Yes, sorry about this Ang, but "on the job" (over here anyway) (as well as meaning, 'while working') is a colloquialism for being engaged in an act of sexual congress. Consequently it makes your rather sweet little poem hillarious. You might want to rethink that line, especially as it actually says the Gods are "on the job."

Live and be well - H