An Autumn Foliage Vignette

[angliholic]

I spread out my heart like a page of poetry
underneath an autumn maple tree
hoping the floating leaves may fall right upon it
and paint a foliage vignette on it

[zoolane]

I like first lines, special "my heart like a page of poetry".

[Xillus_Xavier]

Love it. Absolutely love this poem. My only suggestion/crit would be to change the title. It's too close to the final line, so I think you can come up with something better, therefore eliminating the redundancy.

[namenlose]

I liked the poem too. It's rather simple, but the dynamicism of the imagery worked well with its conciseness in my judgment.

[Bar22do]

Very nice, Anglihol!