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cacian
10-10-2012, 05:02 AM
feel the draft
coming trough the roof
it feels like thunder
it makes your ceiling move,
are you ready
can you take the heat?
or is it a ponder
you think you can
seduce?

feel the fast take you
to the hood
it looks like wonder
it comes to ditch the spoof,
are you steady
can you stand the cool?
or is it tricky you
are too stuck to move?

Bar22do
10-10-2012, 11:09 AM
cacian, I love this poem of yours. It describes a simple situation and reads still surreal. Thank you!

cacian
10-10-2012, 12:09 PM
Bar22 I thank you very much so glad you liked this one.