Le roi de harps
10-06-2012, 10:24 PM
Hello I'm new to this forum and I want to give you my first story tell me what you think.... ( it's just a bit of fiction not real but based on a fiction tale of Marie antionette it's not real only in my dreams and from the word I speak)
It was snowy afternoon as the court gather in the hall of mirrors awaiting their new Dauphine. Whispers hum as they await the girl who wears the gold mask nobody knows who it is or what she looks like or when she will arrive for all they know shes most likely in the crowd. We now turn our attention to this young girl. As she rides to the palace still wearing her mask many try to get a look at her as she passes throught the city she watches children play in the snow a beloved pastime she once shared. She arrives at the palace standing out of her carriage strong and ready to meet her new family. She knows nothing about them only that they are to care for her now as her home is far from close. Tears build up in her eyes but she drys then knowing she is to be strong as her new life awaits she puts on her cape and walks to the gates it opens the sudden mist of snow begins to disappear and she sees her new home she thinks to her self what a wonderful place. As she walks up the stairs and past her new bedrooms she hears the court mumbles through the next door. Her heart races and she feels scared and alone as she is about to face her new family in just minutes . As the king , dauphin and the rest of the royal family wait for the girl in the golden mask. The king holds the key to open the lock that keeps her beauty hidden away. He waits nervous thinking is she ugly is she horrid... The doors open and the court is silent as they stare to the end of the hall when a young girl in a powder blue and White dress walk down the silent hall in her golden mask is the girl long awaited. Everyone gestures a bow or curtsy as she passes faint whispers echo as men and women whisper gossip or curiosity makes them speak. As she approaches the king she curtsied and the king gestured a nod along with the others of the family. He gestures her to come closer as he takes the key from his pocket he breaks the lock on her mask. As the mask fell to the ground the king and the family were stunned at her beauty as her blond long hair falls down across her long neck and she gives a glowing smile with her illuminating eyes she is greeted by her future husband a rather fetching man by the name of Louis. He asked her for the name of the goddess that stands before him. The young girl responds with Antionette..... To be continued
It was snowy afternoon as the court gather in the hall of mirrors awaiting their new Dauphine. Whispers hum as they await the girl who wears the gold mask nobody knows who it is or what she looks like or when she will arrive for all they know shes most likely in the crowd. We now turn our attention to this young girl. As she rides to the palace still wearing her mask many try to get a look at her as she passes throught the city she watches children play in the snow a beloved pastime she once shared. She arrives at the palace standing out of her carriage strong and ready to meet her new family. She knows nothing about them only that they are to care for her now as her home is far from close. Tears build up in her eyes but she drys then knowing she is to be strong as her new life awaits she puts on her cape and walks to the gates it opens the sudden mist of snow begins to disappear and she sees her new home she thinks to her self what a wonderful place. As she walks up the stairs and past her new bedrooms she hears the court mumbles through the next door. Her heart races and she feels scared and alone as she is about to face her new family in just minutes . As the king , dauphin and the rest of the royal family wait for the girl in the golden mask. The king holds the key to open the lock that keeps her beauty hidden away. He waits nervous thinking is she ugly is she horrid... The doors open and the court is silent as they stare to the end of the hall when a young girl in a powder blue and White dress walk down the silent hall in her golden mask is the girl long awaited. Everyone gestures a bow or curtsy as she passes faint whispers echo as men and women whisper gossip or curiosity makes them speak. As she approaches the king she curtsied and the king gestured a nod along with the others of the family. He gestures her to come closer as he takes the key from his pocket he breaks the lock on her mask. As the mask fell to the ground the king and the family were stunned at her beauty as her blond long hair falls down across her long neck and she gives a glowing smile with her illuminating eyes she is greeted by her future husband a rather fetching man by the name of Louis. He asked her for the name of the goddess that stands before him. The young girl responds with Antionette..... To be continued