Boiling

[CoverTheSun]

Red hot fury
Courses through

Alien blue veins
Red and blue
Make

Purple bruises
Across
Blistered knuckles

Maybe I want
To
Rip the flesh
Off of your skull
Want to see
Blood and bone

Can you just
Let me

Let me
Get Close enough
To press my knuckles
Against
Your windpipe

Let me

Let me
Watch you
Suffocate

[Buh4Bee]

Very, very dark. I understand what you mean by the title, but I don't think it is the best fit from the actual description of events in the poem. You may be boiling, but the poem is actually about you trying to go after someone who you are enraged at.

This is very visceral. I think you have good control over the expression of the anger. The build up toward the end is paced well. I hope this made you feel better after you wrote this.