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E.A Rumfield
10-02-2012, 03:09 AM
False smiles
and straight white teeth
Crisp collars
and wrinkled souls
Good talkers
circular logic
Exceedingly affable
The truth seeps through
a half *** facade
Ties so tight
they choke the life
right out of there beady little eyes
and everything in sight

cacian
10-02-2012, 04:29 AM
Very neat I like this style.
Very descriptive and enjoyable!
Thank you!

Xillus_Xavier
10-02-2012, 10:38 AM
I enjoyed this. Short and to the point. Nice word use.

Delta40
10-02-2012, 11:02 AM
there should be their. It seems such a generalisation to me since not all men in ties appear this way. I would have rather read something more symbolic about the suit and tie

E.A Rumfield
10-02-2012, 01:14 PM
there should be their. It seems such a generalisation to me since not all men in ties appear this way. I would have rather read something more symbolic about the suit and tie

I never meet one of these people that I did like.