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cacian
09-24-2012, 06:52 AM
tragedy strikes
everyday facts
sorrow and doubt
serenade tact
understand pain
let it see rain

nature paints
sense
gives time
a tense moment
to lapse
elapse
then laxe
and all the same
lets it all rise
to gain
entice
newer surrounds

tragedy strikes
a matter fast
harmful is cast
when subtle's
less
keep leaning
strength
to push down fence.

hallaig
09-24-2012, 07:58 AM
poetry strikes,
never quite right,
use the wrong tense
disnae make sense
when in a bind
use a bad rhyme
when you feel crap
turn the word tap

cacian
09-24-2012, 08:03 AM
poetry strikes,
never quite right,
use the wrong tense
disnae make sense
when in a bind
use a bad rhyme
when you feel crap
turn the word tap

peotry
feels refined
or dense
it all depends
on moment sense