Inevitability of Change

[Tashkeelahmed]

Inevitability of Change

Leaving my humble abode for a new one
Could vigorously stimulate my sentiments

Never had I thought on such notes
Before I had to make this agonizing decision

With so many emotional attachments
It’s not so easy to do detachments

The sweetest memories do not just go away
They keep tickling you till you are on the way

Overflowing emotions have you swayed
Every time you recall the games you played

Life goes on altering everything in your world
Yet the fond memories can never be altered

They have their own pleasures and pains
Arousing in yourself whenever it rains

Change is inevitable I’ve yet to learn
Have to keep this in mind while waiting for my turn

[hillwalker]

It starts off rather formally, then you introduce the rhyme and it stops making sense if I'm honest.

For instance:

The sweetest memories do not just go away
They keep tickling you till you are on the way

...on the way to what or where?

Instead of writing with freedom to express your thoughts clearly you are allowing the rhyme to control your words. Not the best way to create a poem.

H