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cacian
09-23-2012, 05:26 AM
as I stood up
I saw you fall
I tried to call
to stand you tall
I felt compelled
and so much more
nothing at all
you looked forlorn
almost adjourned
day after day
you trip and grip
a distance between us
is thrown
the gap is blown
sorry feels low
speechless I go

as I stood up
you fell and
slown
an eery sound
shadowed
the run
I tried a second time
to loan
I said hello
listened for words
nothing at all
you looked perturbed
almost alone
time after time
you slip and turn
silence between us
is sole
something has gone
I let you go
this time for good

Dreamsqueen
09-23-2012, 05:46 AM
silence can be so meaningful some times and at other times it makes us lose alot, sometimes you need to be silent, because some words lose their glory when they are said, other times, silence should be thrown away and words should take its place

cacian
09-23-2012, 07:25 AM
silence can be so meaningful some times and at other times it makes us lose alot, sometimes you need to be silent, because some words lose their glory when they are said, other times, silence should be thrown away and words should take its place

Hi Dreamsqueen thank you for reading and feedback.
I agree there is a time for everything even for silence.