"For Pain"

[Mutatis-Mutandis]

Almost too slow to notice
the feeling spreads over me
and I am relaxed.
I took it for pain.
Only pain.

[Bar22do]

It reminds me of a time in my life when I used to have frightful headaches. Sometimes I needed an injection. I would wait for that blissful moment of relief which finally allowed the body to relax...
Thanks for sharing this...

[Buh4Bee]

I like the humor.

[tonywalt]

Love it. Sort of Bukowski-but better.

[Mutatis-Mutandis]

Well, I think I wrote it like Bukowski writes his stuff--thought of it, typed it down in less then a minute, then posted without giving it so much as a cursory proof-read. :D

[tonywalt]

One day you will take Bukowski as a compliment,but not yet..