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zoolane
09-20-2012, 04:49 AM
They are quite few that I could pick but today I choose this one:

Sticks
Sticks to poke you with.
Sticks to battery you with,
Sticks to threat you with.
Sticks to use trip you with.

Words threw at you.
Words to hurt you.
Words to cut your emotions with.
Words to make you feel worthless with.

Jerrybaldy
09-21-2012, 03:07 AM
Hi Zoo. Thanks for getting involved.

This is full of hurt. I can hear it as a song in my head. It is memorable and I see why it is one of your favourites.

Haunted
09-25-2012, 02:56 AM
Love the way you spelled "Thrusday", so you!

Simple, but it tells the story. Nice alliteration in the last line, whether or not you are aware of it.

Bar22do
09-25-2012, 03:02 AM
Zool, the last stanza i heartbreaking.