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E.A Rumfield
09-20-2012, 01:39 AM
I've been the fool.
I've been the captured tiger,
poked and prodded.
remember me?
I'm a circus bear riding
the scooter of your love.
I tried to bring you the world
through my eyes.
You just laughed and
dragged me along.
I've been your dog,
at you beck and call
I sat.
I spoke gently to you,
you were my princess
I sang for you.
But you,
you kicked me aside.
I'm a clown with no costume
singing a song as hopeless
as an ice cube
in the heat.

Delta40
09-20-2012, 03:24 AM
At you(r) beck and call.

Loved it all the way till the dog and princess. ditch those lines and stay with the ice cube ending.

My favourite of yours yet.

Charles Darnay
09-20-2012, 08:26 AM
Riding the scooter of your love is a really out of place and meaningless image. Other than that, it,s very good