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hallaig
09-19-2012, 09:23 AM
Starcat



Every Saturday morning
we meet, my daughter and I,
to study form. She has a plain scone,
sometimes an empire biscuit.
I have coffee. I used to have an egg roll
but she didn’t like the way it ran
yellow onto the napkin.
After a moment or two she’ll
put on her latest pair of glasses
give a slight frown and get to it.
Stars are good, Elektra Star, Mystery Star,
but cats are best, Kenya Cat, Lightning Cat,
Son of Cat. How the pair of us rejoiced
when Starcat was on the card at Ascot,
an alchemy just for us it seemed,
a totemic and irresistible blend
of the cosmic and the cute.
Stars are usually eighth, cats more spry
but still well down the field.
Starcat lost, its life in fact.
I say it has retired and today is eating grass
in the verdant field of our imagining,
a place where people of different ages come,
to watch horses take wing,
and two bob make a thousand pounds.

Anton Hermes
09-19-2012, 10:13 AM
irresistible blend
of the cosmic and the cute.


Simple, insightful storytelling as always.

Bar22do
09-19-2012, 11:13 AM
A d o r a b l e !!!! especially for a cats lover like me! and what a complicity between father and daughter! Love it very much!


PS. plus this subtle allusion to Ascot's horse races...

hillwalker
09-19-2012, 11:51 AM
Nice vignette of a punter's feckless life (I jest)

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zoolane
09-19-2012, 01:53 PM
Lovely poem.

Delta40
09-19-2012, 05:14 PM
Great tasty morsel Hallaig. You're becoming my number one poet on Lit-Net.