Quetzalcoatl - The Feathered Serpent

[Jeos]

Love text written in a jet, with almost no
polish or carving when I was...younger...


Little Serpent, this heart of mine ...
you filled it so much!
You've poisoned it,
you’ve poisoned it with LIFE !

And that ...for life !
I laugh and cry, just like that,
from my guts - Like a fool…

it's stronger than me!
But Little Serpent,this heart
of mine is an uncanny one.
It’s a heart that flutters

that wants to fly
so far so high...
will you dare following me

until losing sight?
Will you dare earn feathers
become Quetzalcoatl
Little Serpent - my heart ?

[Bar22do]

Awe inspiring, Jeos. Life would be the result of poisoning???!!! It reminds me of "Life is a deadly disease one hundred per cent fatal!"
So this Quetzalcoalt is a perverse god, isn't he. If one can say of it that is IS (for it's not poisoned with life...)

[Jeos]

Awe inspiring, Jeos. Life would be the result of poisoning???!!! It reminds me of "Life is a deadly disease one hundred per cent fatal!"
So this Quetzalcoalt is a perverse god, isn't he. If one can say of it that is IS (for it's not poisoned with life...)

Dear friend thanks.Love might be a poisonous nectar.But the most significant for me was/are the archetypal forces acting trough man & woman psychosomatic dynamics.The archetypal forces are made of a chain of symbols implying potential for metamorphosis.
Not dare to assume that potential may put the couple in danger...so no reason for awe...
I hope.

[Bar22do]

1)... but you speak of LIFE, not of LOVE, as poison!
2)also, 'psychosomatic' alluding to disorder, 'dynamics' or progressive movement, your explanation reads to me contradictory.
3)Symbols may represent forces, not the other way around...

I'd re-think the whole thing for more consistency, Jeos, for your intention and ambition reach high.