The Farewell Kiss

[hillwalker]

The Farewell Kiss

Your lips deployed
An air-bag punch
That cushioned me with promises
Then crushed me with the truth

H

[hallaig]

Ah perfidious women! No much to fault in this, a single clever image.

[Hawkman]

A high impact moment! A collision of hope and reality...

Live and be well - H

[cacian]

Splendid and to the point!

[YesNo]

Nice poem.

[Delta40]

This is really good because the description comes with its own sound effects (The air inflating then deflating) which match perfectly the scene of the crushed man that is left behind.

Excellent.

[Jerrybaldy]

Are you absolutely sure you and Prince are two separate people?

[Bar22do]

A little jewel. Truly.

[hillwalker]

Thanks each and every one of you - and as for your query, JB. Well, we've never been seen together in the same bar, so you never know...

H

[Haunted]

Are you absolutely sure you and Prince are two separate people?

Thought the same too!

Using an airbag metaphor to convey the duality, not only is it unique, it's has just the right punch...or should I say, impact. So perfect!

[Delta40]

It's funny but I thought about Prince too but, well, I didn't like to suggest it.....