day by day

[cacian]

on everything
the soft
the harsh
the mellowed kind
the wearied eyed
the suited tie
the leisured type
they make a life
smooth
with a lie
and then they smile
to rind and grind
the bittersweet
taste of elite
night time collapses
daytime arrives
dejavus glare
the air to numb
it tares the sense
joie de vivre's slumped
nothing else funs

[hallaig]

on everything
the soft
the harsh
the mellowed kind
the wearied eyed
the suited tie
the leisured type
they make a life
smooth
with a lie
and then they smile
to rind and grind
the bittersweet
taste of elite
night time collapses
daytime arrives
dejavus glare
the air with numb
it tares the sense
joie de vivre's stumped
nothing else funs


Not sure if you're trying to prove that old adage that if you have enough monkeys typing randomly they'll come up with the complete works of Shakespeare, but you do sometimes hit a memorable line or 2: quite like 'the wearied eye/the suited tie'

[Delta40]

Not sure if you're trying to prove that old adage that if you have enough monkeys typing randomly they'll come up with the complete works of Shakespeare

JFC! Now that is funny Hallaig. Great image

[crusoe]

Well, what is it ?

[cacian]

Well, what is it ?

What is what crusoe?:shocked:

[Jeos]

Like it like it like it. Nice clean refreshing contemporary poetry!

[cacian]

Jeos thank you very much!