Allergies again

[rksingh]

The barber sees
a potential customer
in me but I pass

the tense faces
after the long walk sunshine
a fag in the car

short carnival:
neatly hide faded vests drying
in the balcony

helter skelter
afternoon windy rain
allergies again

--R.K. SINGH

[cacian]

clever poem!
Very nice indeed!

[hillwalker]

Very compact and cryptic - leaves many things for the reader to ponder.

H