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Ruth Stephenson
09-16-2012, 07:47 PM
Cold endless night's,
Whispers in the dark
All my thoughts spinning around
Memories I'll never forget.
Breathing in the cold air,
Looking up into the sky
While lost in my memories
You full of emotions
From the pass to this very moment.
Longing to know the future
As I surrender my life
To start a new beginning,
Embracing myself for the bumpy roads ahead
My mind is spinning inside.
My thoughts and emotions rushing,
Rushing through my head
But settle to a stop,
As I look into the sky
At a cold endless night.

sympathygrl
09-18-2012, 07:18 AM
i love the concept and the way you explored it. All the best :)

Ruth Stephenson
09-18-2012, 08:11 AM
Thank you very much:) this was the most poem that I ever liked because it was published in a book;) <3 it was a dream come true, why I say that is because I never thought I could ever get a poem published... :)