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Jeos
09-13-2012, 09:39 AM
Reflecting our twisted bodies
doubling us to the very end of finite
until the very end of gesture
appearances are not what they seem…

the border - increasingly dense
separating euphoric illusion
from the liberator though sad truth
is a trap: the spring as the fruit

of our games remains dangerously
hidden…which of us shall
dare break the mirror...?
Until the very end of gesture...?

hallaig
09-13-2012, 09:47 AM
'the very end of gesture' doesn't make any sense to me at all.
Neither does 'the spring as the fruit of our games'.

Jeos
09-13-2012, 09:55 AM
'the very end of gesture' doesn't make any sense to me at all.
Neither does 'the spring as the fruit of our games'.

Thanks Hallaig ! You at least you say something...! And if all the rest makes sense for you and you like it a bit then for me...it's ok !