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[Little Gal]

To be insane in the ice that looks like sharpness
To be a filler in the unevenness of hollows and craters lying around and inside
I am scared to be fixed into your dreams and and breathing spaces
Can you not look at my face, and see it?
Can you not stand by and wait for rocks to melt on branches beside the sea?
What do we wish for ? what do we know of wishing,
Is it a new wish or a new way? Is it a way for a way or a way about to be?
Why are you digging so fierce into the water? Can you see its stillness spreading?
Under your feet my crippled shadow has been shrinking inside getting muddy
And crimson hands pushing a wooden plank ahead, without a quiet wave breaking into ripples
And satire of a lustre unusual like honey hives breezeless...
Something is forming
Its mouth reminds me of the day I first felt drowned.

[Jeos]

'What do we wish for ? what do we know of wishing,
Is it a new wish or a new way? Is it a way for a way or a way about to be?
Why are you digging so fierce into the water? Can you see its stillness spreading?'

Perhaps too much questioning or it's the way you do it... but all the rest is excellent material !Congratulations.

[Little Gal]

'What do we wish for ? what do we know of wishing,
Is it a new wish or a new way? Is it a way for a way or a way about to be?
Why are you digging so fierce into the water? Can you see its stillness spreading?'

Perhaps too much questioning or it's the way you do it... but all the rest is excellent material !Congratulations.

yes 'too much' questioning. I am full of 'em, tirelessly so, more because may be the realization follows closely that they may never be answered, not that am always in look for answers either!

Thank you ... :)